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Let the Dead by Dylan Brennan - poetry in focus

We present a quintet of new poems by Dylan Brennan, taken from his newly-published second collection of poetry, Let the Dead.

Let the Dead concerns itself with life’s alchemical processes.

A couple breathe life into a doomed poppet; a photographer immortalises a corpse; Joyce and Breton rub shoulders on the streets of the poet’s adopted Mexico, where life is a tapestry of 'delicate anthers’ and ‘disembodied tongues’. These dark meditations are set against poems which consider love, miscarriage, childbirth and the daily miracle of family life.

Beautiful and disturbing by turns, these reflections on Ireland and Mexico’s shared colonial past invoke topographies both real and imagined, where ‘things in the ground have a tendency to grow.’


FOUR ATTEMPTS AT MAKING A HUMAN

(not) after the Popol Vuh

I.

this is what happened

we made a small person out of mud

& placed it down there on the table

just like the gods (heart of sky)

we rolled up our sleeves (heart of sea)

to get our hands dirty

in the stuff of life

but something went wrong

its neck wouldn't turn

it just stared up at us

a tiny face with no understanding

a barely pulsating thing

(it couldn’t think)

like an overcooked vegetable

(it couldn’t worship)

a sort of primal

gurgle of lamentation

as it dissolved in hot droplets

into nothing

II.

There’s an old joke about the car made out of wood: wooden engine and dashboard, wooden wheels, the only problem—it wooden start. Something similar here. You see, we are chiselled, framed and shaped in the mouths of our peers, remembered by tongue. And so we did it again. We made a little person, a wooden effigy and gave it some words. She crawled briefly before stopping, spoke eloquently until her face dried up into a kind of expressionless, desiccated mask. Her arms and legs turned stiff, an unresponsive little body, rigid and cold. No blood flowed within, no oil or sweat. We remembered stories of similar cases, effigy corpses left to be devoured, mouths and faces ruined and crushed, twig-bones snapped, ground up for the dogs and so we kissed her goodbye and submerged the crumbling husk in an organic and fragrant resin before burning. We inhaled the smoke, smeared the ashes on our arms and chests as the whole earth darkened in a thick black rain. And that was that. To remind me of our little wood-girl experiment, I keep a single splinter ingrained, a speck I carry with me in the palm of my hand.

III.

ah, my darling wife, we’ve never been gods

can’t make corn into anything but food

and so it took us a fourth attempt (no, I’ll not

mention the third) for the expected shock:

a flush of rosewater in the middle of breakfast

we wove our wildflowers into a son: a filigree

of bog-cotton, mouse-ear, mayweed, bedstraw,

bittercress dampened with sea foam, eyebright

and yarrow strengthened with dried strips

of henequen and he was born and lived and grew


BOG COTTON

Only hours before

the spotting began

we took a walk in the sun and bluster

along the northernmost part

of our island country

and saw the only clouds

were the ankle-high tufts

that marked out for us

like a warning

the softest turf

—common cottonsedge

or bog cotton—

I picked some

and so disrupted / destroyed

anemophilous potential

on that windiest hillbrow

Days later now

on the other side

of the Atlantic

in our tiny apartment

on what were once the shores

of a lake island

the dried flowers spill out

from my wallet

as I look for a phone number

I hold a perianth up

to the morning light

and drink hot coffee

while you sleep

I place the fragile whiteness

on a windowsill saucer

by the cacti and succulents

to be blown out:

carried when the rains come


AFTER AN ULTRASOUND

I find myself down the back field

surveying the flora at my toes

beige and purple clover blossoms

and violet heal-alls or woundwort

among the green asterisks of dandelion

and near the white flecks of yarrow

a fragile trefoil I identify later

(reverse image search on my phone)

and more familiar yellows of buttercups

and daisy hearts and knocking gently

against my shins the stooping

black heads of the ribwort plantain

(a wildflower once used to bring

back the dead) and I think of how

as children we just called it all grass


ANACAHUITA

the anacahuita came

to blossom while we waited

to leave hospital and now greets

our arrival back home how sweet

to see those milk cups

blur on the horizon white-freckling

the land as far as the eye can focus

but no everywhere we look

wildflowers give way

to encroaching rectangles

my son you see this is what they do

from García to Monterrey

they're flooding

the plains with concrete

how long this will last

is anyone’s guess

so for now just breathe

this citric welcome

I’ll show you pictures

when you’re older


A Song of Amergin

I’m the blue land crab lost near the salt marsh

I’m the phantom islet that’s appeared on your map

(poured-out-like-water darkness)

I’m the mangrove that gropes through the delta for soil

(brackish ripples near the swollen beachwort)

I’m a sick thing forming in your drinking water

I’m your dream of the semi-desert

(a cold river taken whole in your mouth)

I’m the shaved head of your friend in the pit

I’m a cloth of worms, I’m that addled flesh

(calligraphy on your chest that moves in the night)

I’m the turkey vulture that circles over thornscrub

I’m the blackberry blossom that trembles in drizzle

I’m the marrow that’s needed to moisten your body

(the fresh white of an egg)

I’m the green dampness of a fertile valley

(the rain that’s been withheld)

I’m the last living ghost sitting down among ashes

(if only his thoughts were printed in a book)

I’m the Christmas cactus with its scarlet flecks

I’m a frail enough thing to be broken like a twig

I’m a jawbone thrown on the heap

I’m the silt that separates one nation from another

and the sodden black harvest of a gaunt island

About the poet: Dividing his time between Mexico and Ireland, Dylan Brennan writes poetry and prose. He is a recipient of the Ireland Chair of Poetry Bursary award. His second collection of poetry, Let the Dead (2023), is available now from Banshee Press.

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